Second Cut

So after the first lot of feedback, we set about making our changes to the production.
With re-shoots, deleting scenes and editing new sequences, we have produced our second cut.
What we still need to do before we finalise our production is:

• Re-shoot the office scene
• Create an advanced soundtrack, working on the one we have now to create some more tension.
• Record the answer machine properly. 

Brief Feedback:

• "Ending sequence helps it make more sense and looks better" - Emmie Bryett
• "Good removal of burnt toast, leaves space for more important stuff" - Emma Graveling

• "Change of the sound track to make it more varied" - Joel Colbourne

• "Narrative is easier to follow" - Steph Meares

• "Sound effects with wash in could help signify the dream" - Dave Burrowes