There are areas in which we still have to film, and others that need to be improved.
We received feedback from our class and from the year 13 class.
However, with our class, we used a boom mike to record the sound unfortunately it wasn't plugged in properly so we cannot hear anything said. But we feel the feedback that was given from the year 13 was good enough for us to improve on.
Here is a video of the feedback given from the year 13's who watched our first cut.